poster layout Unit 5 LO2.1
Friday, 21 May 2010
Thursday, 6 May 2010
4.2 feedback on poster
these are the qustions i asked
What is your name? How old are you? Have you seen my poster? Have you seen my animation? Whats do you dislike or like about my poster? Whats do you dislike or like about my animation? Do you think it had any relevance to the Knight Crew production? Is there any thing you think i could of done to improve my work?
Lewis, 16, yes, yes, I liked the way you used colours to make an interesting contrast,also brings out a sence of darkness.
I didnt really like the way it was layed out.
I liked that it was based on the book cover, but i thought that you could have put a bit more in to it.
It deffinatley did because you can sence the theme straight away when you look at it. I would have used just a little more creativity to make sure that it was the best that i could do.
lawrence ellis, 17, yes, yes, i like the knight crew logo on the moon and the warning tape in the middle
i like the fact that the people move on the bridge because it gives the animation a life like feel
i think not because the colour scheme but i do because of the main theme of the yyouth culture involved
no i think its all good as it is x
Lottie, 17, yes, no yes, no , There are lots of colours going on and maybe it might have looked better with actually shadows of people instead of random colours but it effective as it is.
I really like your animation, and its good that you have use the front cover as your main base and have worked around it to make it move
Yes, because you've the cover in your animation it has a lot joined to the knight crew,
Maybe on your poster you could have used really people
Hayden Taylor, 17, yes, yes, i like the cloud background as it gives a dark and eery look to the poster, and i also like he black and yellow bnner, as it pops out at you.
I don't dislike anything of the animation, i think it is very good. Well done CJ =]
I think the animation has a strong relevance to the Knight Crew production as it uses parts of the front cover of the book.
Nothing
Connor, 16, yes, yes, honestly i kinda liked it it's pretty cool except i thought it was kinda bigger and more drastic than the knight crew it's sort of look's like alien's rulling over the world "independent's day" type thing, honestly i think it's not so realistic for the knight crew yet cool but dose'nt really fit.Your animation was rather blank but well put and i honestly think that will work but it's simply just the writing is moving in spelling out knight crew and the figure's in the back move it was kind of token from the main poster so i think you should have made up your own idea, because it's alway's better to try your best to make your backdrops better than the book,or equally diffrent in form, was well created.
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yes
took it in to consideration to create your own aniamtion in form.
evaluation
I fell that i managed my time well and my message to get a younger range of people to attend opera was succesfull, due to the style used to appeal to that target audeince. I construced my poster very well, there was more time left at the end to possibly add some more details and other relivent things to it, but i was happy with the final piece. I got some good feedback from the poster from it geting used in gylnebournes prospectus which made me happy; I felt like i targeted my audince very well with the connextion of gylnebournes target audience, due to it being young people and supported housing is full of young people. I could of improved my campaign by dispaying more posters in a larger range of areas, as well as considering what the knight crew is and put images relevent to that.
What is your name? How old are you? Have you seen my poster? Have you seen my animation? Whats do you dislike or like about my poster? Whats do you dislike or like about my animation? Do you think it had any relevance to the Knight Crew production? Is there any thing you think i could of done to improve my work?
Lewis, 16, yes, yes, I liked the way you used colours to make an interesting contrast,also brings out a sence of darkness.
I didnt really like the way it was layed out.
I liked that it was based on the book cover, but i thought that you could have put a bit more in to it.
It deffinatley did because you can sence the theme straight away when you look at it. I would have used just a little more creativity to make sure that it was the best that i could do.
lawrence ellis, 17, yes, yes, i like the knight crew logo on the moon and the warning tape in the middle
i like the fact that the people move on the bridge because it gives the animation a life like feel
i think not because the colour scheme but i do because of the main theme of the yyouth culture involved
no i think its all good as it is x
Lottie, 17, yes, no yes, no , There are lots of colours going on and maybe it might have looked better with actually shadows of people instead of random colours but it effective as it is.
I really like your animation, and its good that you have use the front cover as your main base and have worked around it to make it move
Yes, because you've the cover in your animation it has a lot joined to the knight crew,
Maybe on your poster you could have used really people
Hayden Taylor, 17, yes, yes, i like the cloud background as it gives a dark and eery look to the poster, and i also like he black and yellow bnner, as it pops out at you.
I don't dislike anything of the animation, i think it is very good. Well done CJ =]
I think the animation has a strong relevance to the Knight Crew production as it uses parts of the front cover of the book.
Nothing
Connor, 16, yes, yes, honestly i kinda liked it it's pretty cool except i thought it was kinda bigger and more drastic than the knight crew it's sort of look's like alien's rulling over the world "independent's day" type thing, honestly i think it's not so realistic for the knight crew yet cool but dose'nt really fit.Your animation was rather blank but well put and i honestly think that will work but it's simply just the writing is moving in spelling out knight crew and the figure's in the back move it was kind of token from the main poster so i think you should have made up your own idea, because it's alway's better to try your best to make your backdrops better than the book,or equally diffrent in form, was well created.
<<<<<<<<.
yes
took it in to consideration to create your own aniamtion in form.
evaluation
I fell that i managed my time well and my message to get a younger range of people to attend opera was succesfull, due to the style used to appeal to that target audeince. I construced my poster very well, there was more time left at the end to possibly add some more details and other relivent things to it, but i was happy with the final piece. I got some good feedback from the poster from it geting used in gylnebournes prospectus which made me happy; I felt like i targeted my audince very well with the connextion of gylnebournes target audience, due to it being young people and supported housing is full of young people. I could of improved my campaign by dispaying more posters in a larger range of areas, as well as considering what the knight crew is and put images relevent to that.
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